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Mary Macken-Horarik's avatar

Totally love this story.

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Steve Shann's avatar

Thanks Mary. We all have these early formative stories, don't we!

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Jane L's avatar

Hi Steve, I remember you sharing this story during my teacher training. It was such a treat to revisit it now! Thank you. Nick’s poem left me speechless - painful, sweet and precise. Hope you’re well, Jane L

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Steve Shann's avatar

Oh Jane, How lovely to hear from you! Would love to hear more about what you’re up to these days. My email is steveshann47@gmail.com if you feel like giving me your news. And are you tempted to join our book chat? Hope so!

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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

The poems you chose for the kids that day were pretty amazing!

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Steve Shann's avatar

There was, in those days, a big emphasis on the poetry written by the young. Books published, workshops organised. Is it the same these days (perhaps, being retired, I'm just out of the loop.

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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

So interesting — I’ve never taught kids, so don’t have an idea of what that world is like.

But I must have been a school kid myself at around the same time you’re writing about, and I don’t remember anything like it even in my little hippie school.

We did publish our own anthology of kids’ poems at least one year that I remember, but I don’t remember _reading_ poems by kids. (The library had an unbearably painful book called “I Never Saw Another Butterfly” that had poems by kids, but that was a completely different context.)

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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

And the whole scene was described beautifully.

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Steve Shann's avatar

Again thankyou. As a substacker yourself, you'll know how much comments like these are valued, and how encouraging they are.

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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

I’ve never taught kids, but I’ve taught adults quite a bit, and I recognize a piece of masterful teaching when I see it described, and this one was, so well!

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Steve Shann's avatar

It felt like I was teaching by instinct rather than any deep understanding. But it was an important moment for me.

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Maria (Linnesby essays)'s avatar

Thank you! A lovely account. Was so glad to have read this.

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Steve Shann's avatar

Many thanks Linnesby. I'm so glad you found and read it.

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Therese Kara Osborne's avatar

Thanks Steve, beautifully evoked

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Steve Shann's avatar

Thanks Therese. It was fun to write, and used to be the centrepiece of a lecture I'd give to preservice teachers. I always enjoyed telling it.

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Pip Karmel's avatar

Great story Steve. Very moving.

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Steve Shann's avatar

Thanks Pip. Valued praise from an ace storyteller.

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